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simple attempt at improvement2

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trying to see if all the errors were fixed

if you spot any errors, speak up or you fail at life.

if there are no errors, then tomorrow i'll darken the lines and digitize this shit.



(on the leg, i spent three hours trying to fix, i will refine the lines asap)
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:star::star::star::star::star-half: Overall
:star::star::star::star::star: Vision
:star::star::star::star::star: Originality
:star::star::star::star::star-empty: Technique
:star::star::star::star::star-half: Impact

I love his intimidating pose! The lines are also very well cleaned up but still have that sketchy rough drafty/outliney look. This is okay and great since you are going to digitalize this. I think the smoothness with his clothes and his figure make it more of a fun comic book kind of look and it makes me happy. The design of the clothing is well thought out along with the head and tail. I look forward to seeing what you are going to do with this image, I’m sure you will do well! But Maybe adding a little design in the blade of the scythe as well might add to this.