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May 9, 2011
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:icontherealdarkfox13:
Epic Crossover of SharpClaw and Heartless
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Critique time~ :la:

First off, I like how you drew the armor and the way you shaded it. It's not flat, which is good.

Over all, the shading of the entire work is good. Except for the claws and other random white parts. Those aren't shaded an all. I was, at first wondering what the ones on the armor were because I wasn't sure because there was no depth to them.

The little black dots that are everywhere are really distracting and take away from the piece as a whole. As does the white background. You should add some color, draw a scene behind it or something because right now it's just blah with a dragon in the middle of it.

Parts of the legs look a little too skinny, like that part of its right leg. The part that looks like it's about to snap from the weight. Yeah, that one...
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:iconzack700:
If this was a heartless in KH2, I don't think I would've ever finished that game... ;p
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:iconladyastral:
good caracter ^_^
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:iconxxyuikoxxyamazakixx:
wow this looks freakin awesome nice work
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~SpicedMoonDust Dec 1, 2011  Student General Artist
hey this is probebly your best one :)
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*EmzieTowers Nov 30, 2011  Hobbyist General Artist
I don't know what it is, but I LOVE this piece! :D I think it's because of the way you've done the legs, they look spindly XD
Love the armour too :3
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:icontherealdarkfox13:
awww, thank you. he was a bugger to draw.
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~Frazzled-Niya Sep 14, 2011  Hobbyist Digital Artist
something else I'd run in the other direction if faced with D8!
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